12:05 A.M., Blog entry begin!
Alright, this didn't count! Internet was down so i couldn't post >:3
Now that that's out of the way, let's move on to today's entry ^_^ Well, i found a really old RP that i did a year and a half ago (For those of you who don't know what an RP is, it is, at least in this case, a text based Role-Playing adventure. Yes, i am a nerd indeed.) and MY GOD!! I sucked at writing! XD If you read the chapter of my story that i posted and thought that was bad, then you haven't seen anything yet XD I mean, my writing alone is 100 times better than it was back then! My character development techniques, describing actions, managing multiple characters at one time, and just in general telling the story, has improved greatly! And my grammar and spelling :) It was nice seeing how into my work i was back then, even though it was terrible. I felt a little bit of nostalgia, wonderful memories flooding in of me thinking what i could say next, or how the other two people would add some excitement to the story. (Another note, the text based Role-Playing adventures that i used to take part in were always collaborative, meaning more than one person was working on it at once.) It was nice... And now i think i shall post the second part of the ever-growing story ^_^ I revised it alot so i hope this is better than the last one XD
Abigail is a loner in this post-apocalyptic world. Her past is very strange and secretive. She was abandoned at birth and found by a group of survivors a few days afterwards, with a note attached to her saying, “This is Abigail, we pray that whoever is reading this has found her before she has died… Please, take good care of her…” What they didn’t know was the great power that lied within her, waiting, plotting, preparing for the day that it could take control... Her life with the survivors was, how shall I put it, short lived. They exiled her from their village at the age of eleven, fearing that she may cause another disaster like the on that had devastated their community once before. But i digress, i shall save that particular story for another day… Over these past four years, she’s grown used to this lifestyle, training her body and mind to prepare herself for any danger she may come across. As Abigail continued running, slowing down due to fatigue, she looked around for a spot to lay low for a while to regain her energy. She saw, amidst the rubble of a tower, a tiny alcove, just large enough for her to lie down and rest. As she scuttled her way into the alcove, she grabbed two nearby boulders, about the size of bowling balls, and used them as camouflage, closing the only entrance.
And the next part shall be shared tomorrow ^_^ XD Hope you enjoy it readers ^_^ And please, don't criticize too harshly, do remember, i'm 15 so i'm not that good at this yet... I will appreciate some constructive criticism, like a few pointers, just don't come out with a comment saying something like, "Oh god, this story sucks, stop writing this junk you moron!" Thanks for reading ^_^ This is Lee signing off!
End Blog entry, 12:26 A.M.
Thursday, January 7, 2010
Monday, January 4, 2010
8:37 P.M, Begin Blog entry.
Hello all of you readers out there! Well... If anyone reads this... So today i think i'll share a the beginning of my story ^_^ So here's the very beginning of my story, Red Crescent ^_^
Red Crescent
Inspired by The Tripod Trilogy, written by Samuel Youd (Under the pseudonym John Christopher)
“One day… We will meet again… Even if I have to search the ends of the Earth and beyond to find you… I swear on it…”
Our story begins in the ruins of a city, destroyed many years ago. A teenage girl, no older than 15, is seen running through the city at blazing speeds. This is the heroine of our story. She is Abigail Volt, an emotional girl with raised intelligence, slightly less than average height, and a strong passion for freedom. Many years ago, an alien race descended from the stars and desecrated our planet with their presence. At first, all was peaceful, our visitors had given us many wonderful advancements, such as a cure for cancer, a way to harness the power of solar energy to the fullest, and the schematics for a hovercraft that can easily be made by most companies on this planet. But the alien’s true intentions were much more sinister than anyone could have imagined.
The aliens began to invade our planet using the knowledge they had gained during their stay. They devastated our nations by releasing large amounts of poisonous gas that spread across the world. Billions of people died within the first twenty-four hours. There was no cure, there was no hope, there was only chaos. The few that survived, due to extreme luck or extreme paranoia, were from that point on, hunted like animals by the aliens.
All people who have survived to this day know the tale of a brave group of fellow survivors that sacrificed themselves for the sake of the human race. The group, called “BioReign”, boarded one of the alien’s sentinel ships and managed to hack into it’s computer system. Through their acts of bravery, they gave the human race hope. They had revealed the one weakness of their foes. The humans had made weapons designed to take advantage of this weakness. Now, the humans could fight back.
And that's the beginning of my story ^_^ How do you like it reader? =D Hope you enjoyed it ^_^ And that's all from me for today :P This is Lee, signing out!
End Blog Entry, 8:49 P.M.
Hello all of you readers out there! Well... If anyone reads this... So today i think i'll share a the beginning of my story ^_^ So here's the very beginning of my story, Red Crescent ^_^
Red Crescent
Inspired by The Tripod Trilogy, written by Samuel Youd (Under the pseudonym John Christopher)
“One day… We will meet again… Even if I have to search the ends of the Earth and beyond to find you… I swear on it…”
Our story begins in the ruins of a city, destroyed many years ago. A teenage girl, no older than 15, is seen running through the city at blazing speeds. This is the heroine of our story. She is Abigail Volt, an emotional girl with raised intelligence, slightly less than average height, and a strong passion for freedom. Many years ago, an alien race descended from the stars and desecrated our planet with their presence. At first, all was peaceful, our visitors had given us many wonderful advancements, such as a cure for cancer, a way to harness the power of solar energy to the fullest, and the schematics for a hovercraft that can easily be made by most companies on this planet. But the alien’s true intentions were much more sinister than anyone could have imagined.
The aliens began to invade our planet using the knowledge they had gained during their stay. They devastated our nations by releasing large amounts of poisonous gas that spread across the world. Billions of people died within the first twenty-four hours. There was no cure, there was no hope, there was only chaos. The few that survived, due to extreme luck or extreme paranoia, were from that point on, hunted like animals by the aliens.
All people who have survived to this day know the tale of a brave group of fellow survivors that sacrificed themselves for the sake of the human race. The group, called “BioReign”, boarded one of the alien’s sentinel ships and managed to hack into it’s computer system. Through their acts of bravery, they gave the human race hope. They had revealed the one weakness of their foes. The humans had made weapons designed to take advantage of this weakness. Now, the humans could fight back.
And that's the beginning of my story ^_^ How do you like it reader? =D Hope you enjoyed it ^_^ And that's all from me for today :P This is Lee, signing out!
End Blog Entry, 8:49 P.M.
*sigh* It's currently 6:21 in the morning... Haven't caught a wink of sleep... I've just been up all night, attempting to write more of my story, creating this, editing profiles, updating statuses... It's kinda exhausting after a while.. Well, might as well tell ya about my day while i've got your attention, who knows, you might like it.
Well, i woke up late, as usual, falling face first out of my mother's bed (She's at her boyfriend's house, i have to sleep in her room to make sure her bird's alright.) onto the floor. As you can obviously tell, that's not exactly a good way to start the day. After i shook off the pain in my head, i slowly began my usual routine. This consisted of getting dressed, getting a bite to eat, and finding the computer. When i got here, i found that i had nothing new, except for YouTube, ah YouTube.. One of my closest friends through troubled times... But i digress, anyway, after viewing a few vids i decided it was time to go out for a bit. Sadly, i had no pants that were clean. So that plan was ruined right away. (By now you're probably bored to death, so here's a good video to keep your interest ^_^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pc-EP-0xEDQ ) So after a few hours of boredom i played some MegaMan 9. But i suck balls at that game, right now i'm actually stuck on the stage in the fortress where you have to go through that annoying ass Amoeba boss thing... So after a few continues, the rage built up, but, after years of gaming, i just put the controller down and walked away.. Saving me money because i didn't smash the TV with the controller. So, a few more boredom filled hours pass and my mother comes home... With her boyfriend. So we all talk a bit, she raids the fridge for food she can take back with her to his house, and i'm stuck with them for about an hour. So she leaves the house, leaving me with nothing... So i've spent the last -Calculates the time- 8 hours watching old videos... Man life's boring right now! Well... I hope this interested you a bit, tomarrow i'll have a better blog post up, probably a rant or something like that... Maybe a chapter from the book i'm writing! =D Well, this is Lee signing off!
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